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    Post by Shojiro Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:41 pm

    (Second Character)

    ~General Information~

    Name: Raphael Muteki

    Nickname/Alias: Raphael the Invincible (This is mainly a formality)

    Weight: 169 lb (about 200 lbs with armor on)

    Height: 6'3"

    Age: 20

    Gender: Male

    Appearance:
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    Clothing: Under his armor, generally wears a fancy man-blouse, and a pair of blue slacks. His armor consists of a complete torso and arm amor, while have long leg armor. The only normal clothing visible would be the upper part of his slacks (upper legs and groin) and a bit of his blouse untucked from the armor.

    Additional Outfits: He could be not wearing his armor!

    Personality: He is respectful and elegant in his behavior. From a young age he was taught the importance of good sportsmanship and etiquette. Of course he is not always this way, during combat, he fights using his abilities to their best. He quite enjoys fighting really. He never goes back on his word, however, sometimes he would let someone live just because he enjoyed fighting them. It is his firm belief that sometimes, a great fight is the greatest reward. He is quite different from most ninjas, but not to be underestimated.

    He is a skilled fencer, and he is also extremely dangerous with generally any weapon he ends up grabbing. He respects all of his opponents, and shows it by never holding back. EVER.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Norimune (Disowned the Name)

    Kekei Genkai: Seion

    Clan Symbol: A wolf clenching a katana in its jaws

    Clan History: Though the origin of the Norimune clan is shrouded in the depths of history, both it's recent history and it's founding are known to all of those who know the history of the Norimune Clan. A man known as Kyato Norimune was the founding member of the clan, born with an incredible power in which he couldn't believe existed, however he saw the potential in the kekkei genkai that had been granted to him. Kyato was able to form a foreign metallic ore from his body into his bloodstream so that he could call upon it at any time. He found that he could control the metal in any which way he wanted to, however there were many mysteries he did not know about it. He created the Norimune Clan for the few who were like him and founded the beliefs of the clan, that to forge a weapon, one must first know the weapon and then know how to use that weapon. You see, Kyato created a new way to create weapons, by taking the foreign metal in his blood and forging it with his chakra. He created many treasured weapons and expanded the clan's influence with the Shodai Mizukage, establishing a base within Kirigakure.

    Under Kyato's leadership, the Clan flourished, and it did so for many more years, however a hundred years after Kyato's reign, things started to change for the worst when the clan's young prodigy Makoto Norimune turned to the side of Otogakure no Sato. She was ordered to slay both Sazaku's father Takashi and himself, and this split the clan in two, one faction siding with Otogakure and one with Kirigakure. The ensuing slaughter by Matoko cause the clan to further shatter, members eventually spreading to all of the great shinobi villages.

    Ability Summary:

    Seion (Serene) The mysterious metal ore that is exclusive to the norimune clan, it is unknown exactly how or why it came to be. The first of the true Norimune, Kyato Norimune named it Seion due to its faint blue colored hue. Its fully capabilities are unknown, but are actively researched and tested by members of the clan. What they do know however is that it naturally absorbs chraka, leading in part to its natural strength and durability, which is slightly greater then that of titanium. It is due to this extremely non magnetic metal that Norimune made weapons are considered to be among the greatest in the world, and the foundation of the Clan's strength.

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    Name: Seion Detection
    Description: An ability common to all Norimune, this allows them to detect all the Seion in a 100 metre area around them. This includes other Norimune, due to the metal being part of their blood and body.

    Name: Kaneseitan Metallic Birth
    Description: The most basic skill of the Norimune bloodline/family, this allows them to gather the Seion in their bodies, before drawing it out of them and using it to create and form the weaponry that the clan is famous for. It is said that nobody in the clan can be considered an adult until they have mastered this ability, and created a weapon that passes the clan's leader's inspection. The size of weapons that can be created depends on the user's rank. The chraka cost of creating the weapon, is equal to the weapons rank, ie making a Kunai would cost as much chraka as an E ranked Weapon, while a Naginata would cost as much as an B ranked jutsu. They cannot create weapons with chraka or elemental effects with this limit, and just because they can make a weapon, doesn't mean they can wield it unless they meet the requirements. Creating a favored weapon reduces the cost by a single rank.

    E: Kunai Sized
    D: Dagger Sized
    C: Wakizashi Sized
    B: Katana Sized
    A: Spear Sized
    S: No Size restraints

    Name: Tensa Seisei Heavenly Variation of Creation
    Description: A more advanced form of training in the bloodline, this allows the Norimune to take advantage of the Chraka absorbing and storage abilities of Seion to create weaponry that harness chraka to create special or elemental effects. Creating an weapon that has an affect based on the element they have increases the chraka cost by a single rank. Creating a weapon that has an effect based on other types of chraka, or an element that they don't have, increases the chraka cost by two ranks.

    Name: Metal Imbuement
    Description: One of the greatest features of Seion is its adaptability, which can prove an advantage in many different situations. While most people focus on the metal's hardness, and the way that it can have chraka channeled through it, fewer people realize that there is more to the Norimune Clan's weaponry then just that. Through a special advanced technique, the Norimune can have the Seion used to create the metal 'mimic' the effects of other kinds of metal, granting an additional ability from below. It can only mimic a single ability, and increases the chraka cost of creating the weapon by one Rank.

    Silver: Grants 20% extra damage against the supernatural (Demons and the like)
    Tainted : Grants 20% extra damage against the non supernatural (Humans...dogs)
    Unobatanium : Nullifies Defensive jutsu and effects that are equal to or less than the rank of the user
    Mithril: Makes the Weapon 20% lighter, so it can be swung quicker. In addition, the blade will always be as shiny and reflective as a mirror.
    Denadorite: Makes the weapon immune to jutsu and effects that break weaponry.
    Ithildin: Makes the weapon unable to be seen by any chraka based means. Meaning it can only be seen by the normal unaugmented human eye.


    Name: Eye for Talent
    Description: The Norimune's life is resolved around weapons, they make, use, and view weapons as art and war. With all this weapon use in the family, and them being a weapon in essence, the Norimune have gained the ability view a weapon's skills and extra talents (if any) as a piece of art and for war purposes. They can determine exactly how a weapon is used and basic secondary functions by a minor glance.

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Jounin

    Letter Rank: A

    Village: Kirigakure

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main: Kenjutsu
    • Sub: Weaponry

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main: Earth
    • Main: Fire
    • Sub: Metal

    Special Characteristics: He is incredibly respectful. Even though he has his bloodline, he tends to wield but one, his sword. He is incredibly gifted at fencing, and extremely well-trained at it as well.

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    ~History/RP Sample~

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    Dropout Arc:

    Serene Demon Arc:

    Redemption Arc:

    "I Am But a Swordsman" Arc:

    Roleplay Sample:

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    Post by Echo Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:00 pm

    I'll start with these. Your KKG's last ability needs to be removed or edited. You may be able to know how the weapon is used, but simply looking at it and knowing everything about ti is metagame. (Name: Eye for Talent )

    With that kind of kekkei genkai, you need weaponry as a skill specialty.

    And for this, you need a a real classification.
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    Post by Shojiro Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:10 pm

    Amended.
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    Post by Echo Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:34 pm

    Sho Meimei Eda (Many Invisible hands)

    there is no SS rank. And you need to add how long that stays active. The higher ranks of that must drain a lot of chakra since theres so many, and especially since you don't have the wind element.

    Nexus

    B ranked, especially with 100ft

    Ten Kouken (Heavenly Guardian)

    Same thing. How long does it last, and this would be incredibly chakra draining, especially since you don't have the wind element.

    Double Fang

    Way to fast for a C rank.
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    Post by Shojiro Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:40 pm

    Motion Passed.
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    Post by Echo Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:43 pm

    Name: Eye for Talent

    Still a problem..seeing a weapons abilities is something no one can do unless the person were to show the abilities.

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    Post by Shojiro Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:02 pm

    I meant it like basic secondary functions. Like if he can clearly see a trigger, he can guess it shoots a projectile of some sort. He cannot guess boosts or anything.
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    Post by Echo Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:06 pm

    Oh ok..

    Approved. Create the account and post here with it and I'll give you your headband, and other accessories.
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    Post by Raphael Muteki Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:10 pm

    Done and Done.

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