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    Dawnpaw Mizuka

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    Post by Dawnpaw Fri Jul 16, 2010 3:07 pm

    ~General Information~

    Name: Dawnpaw Mizuka

    Nickname/Alias: None

    Weight: 72 lb

    Height: 5"4'

    Age: 16

    Gender: Female

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:
    Dawnpaw has an hourglass body, D sized breast and shapley legs. Her hair is black with bangs dyed blue. Her eyes are neon ice blue. she wears a snake fang necklace (considered to be her lucky charm) and has a large paw print tattoo on her back. She to wear her hair over her face because she belives it makes her look cooler.


    Clothing:
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    (butt is covered) this outfit shows alot of clevage and back, it comes with belted laced gloves. It shows off her stomach and part of her sides, it covers up almost all of her legs. This outfit also comes with long boots.

    Additional Outfits: None

    Personality: Dawnpaw has ADHD so she's very hyperactive and always getting into trouble. She tends to"borrow" things such as scrolls and weapons. She Loves new experimces and adventures and leaves her village often sometimes at weeks at a time. When she finds a good friend she is loyal and would do almost anything to help them. She tries to have a high tolerance with people but she gets angry quickly. She dreams of a world with less violence. She can be very lazy.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Mizuka clan

    Kekei Genkai: ice manipulation

    Clan Symbol: N/A



    Clan History:
    This unnamed clan lived in the Land of Water. Some time ago, the country was in the midst of a civil war. In this war, different sides battled each other using ninja, some of whom possessed kekkei genkai. After the war ended, memories of the horrific battles still lingered in the minds of the people, causing wide-spread persecutions against those with kekkei genkai. Because of this, Haku's clan, whose members carried the Ice Release kekkei genkai, went into hiding.


    Ability Summary:

    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Chunin

    Letter Rank: B

    Village: Kirikage

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    Main: Ninjutsu
    Sub: Genjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    Main: Water
    Main: Wind
    Sub: Ice

    Special Characteristics: unusual amount if chakra

    ~Jutsu~

    Name:
    Rank:
    Element:
    Description:

    [color=cyan]Ice justus

    Name:Ice Spikes
    Rank: C
    Element: ice
    Descrpition: Dawnpaw can make ice spikes appear out of the ground.


    Name:Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors
    Rank:?
    Element: ice
    Description:Using his kekkei genkai, Haku can create a dome of twenty-one mirrors made out of ice to trap an opponent. Twelve remain at ground level, eight are placed above the first twelve and angled toward the ground, and the final mirror is above the rest and facing the ground. Haku can then enter one of the mirrors and instantly transport to another mirror. While moving about he bombards the opponent with attacks at very high speeds, such that the rest of the world appear to be moving in slow motion compared to him. If the mirror Haku is in is broken, he can leap out of one of the fragments and continue his attack or move to another mirror.

    Name:Blizzard
    Rank: C
    Element: ice
    Descrition: Dawnpaw creates a thick blizzard that she she can can use to hide in.She can see easily through the blizzard to to training. Icicles can be made in the blizzard to impale the opponet

    Name:Ice blades
    Rank: B
    Element: ice
    Description: Dawnpaw makes thick blades of ice come from any part of her body

    Name:Frosty wolf pack
    Rank: B
    Element: ice
    Description: Dawnpaw creates a wolf pack made of ice. They can go up to 20 yards away from her. The stay on the feild until the justu is undone or they are destroyed


    Water Justus

    Name: Water Imprisonment of Doom
    Rank: C
    Element: water/ice
    Description:Dawnpaw traps her opponent in a ball of water that begans to fill up she then freezes the outside to prevent escape

    Name: Water Clone Technique
    Rank: C
    Element: water
    Description:The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body

    Name:Starch Syrup Capture Field
    RanK: C
    Element: water
    Description: Dawnpaw will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance.

    Name:Water Release: Gunshot
    Rank:C
    Element:water
    Description:Dawnpaw fires a sphere of water it can bereak wood.(BASEBALL SIZE)

    Name: Water Release: Waterfall Basin Technique
    Rank:C
    Element:Water
    Description:This jutsu will summon a large amount of water from the ground to form a wave to drench the area



    Basic NInjustu

    Chakra shield
    Rank: C
    Description: Dawnpaw puts up a chakra shield to protect her from fire, water, heavy blows and weapons. Blocks C rank attacks

    Name: chakra disc
    Rank: C
    Element:none
    Description: Dawnpaw makes a disc out of her chakra which she can fly on or use as a throwing projectille

    Name:Chakra Claw
    Rank:C
    Element: none
    Description: Dawnpaw wraps her opponet in her chakra causing them extreme pain.

    Chakra shock wave
    Rank:C
    Type:?
    Description: Dawnpaw sendes a pulse of chakra that can destroy rock. The wave can be sent in any direction or in a circle. It can be used to destroy oncoming objects or stop them. When used against a human it can knock them back a few yards at high speeds.


    Name: Were-beast Justu
    Rank:C
    Element: None
    Description: This justu alows Dawnpaw to turn into a animal and gain thier ablilities.
    Animals: Bat,dog,wolf,bird,cat

    Genjustu
    Name: Happly Ever After
    Element: none
    Rank: D
    Description: the genjustu begans with them kill or subduing Dawnpaw things then began to go thier way( withen reason) the genjustu can go up to 5 weeks


    Name: Acid
    Rank: C
    Element:none
    Decription: this genjustu comes in doses!
    Low dose: the effected vision becomes blurry and they expreince a euphoric high
    High dose: the effected goes on a "trip" as if they took acid

    Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
    Rank: D
    Element: none
    Description:Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have moved before the illusion sets in. The illusion showed varies from person to person and shows their greatest fears or what ever would be terrifying to them


    Name: Look Alike
    Rank: D
    Element:none
    Description: Dawnpaw can make herself look like anyone

    ~History/RP Sample~

    History/Background Story:

    Birth:
    Dawnpaw was born on the night of a full moon.she was a trouble maker from the start she would somehow get out of the crib and wander around the house when could learn how to walk she would stack things so she could reach the doorknob then she would wander around the village.

    Childhood:
    Dawnpaw had a pretty easy childhood. She had lots of friends and was a average student. She did get into alot of fights because of her temper. One day when she came back home from one of her explorations she found her mom sitting in the kitchen crying. When she asked her what was wrong she found out that her father had died on a mission.
    Genin:
    Dawnpaw began making hideouts when she went out on her adventures sometimes staying behind from missions. One day when she was coming back home from staying behind she was attacked by a enemy shinobi. She was about to have a death blow when all of a sudden ice spikes appeared everywhere killing her attacker. Dawnpaw searched the area to see if somebody had saved her she found no footprints she came to the conclusion that she did it herself. When she got home she asked her mom about it she told her everything about clan and the kekkei genkai. She began training her so she could learn how to use ice Justus

    Chunin
    It was long and hard but Dawnpaw passed her exams using an aray of her custom justus. A few months the exams her mother came sown with a severe illness and died. She now lives on her own. She continues thinking up new justus and training so she can get stronger.

    Roleplay Sample:
    [b]Dawnpaw put on the ANBU mask she made and used a genjustu to make herself taller and have the apperance that she had on the Anbu outfit. She walked up the stairs of the building and went inside the scroll room. "To easy." She mumbled to herself. She slipped the scroll in her pocket and went home.





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    Post by Michishige Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:06 pm

    please put the clothing and appearance pictures into spoilers. and we would like about a paragraph for both to accompany the pictures
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    Post by Dawnpaw Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:11 pm

    do i have too???
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    Post by Michishige Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:12 pm

    yes
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    Post by Dawnpaw Fri Jul 16, 2010 6:05 pm

    more?
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    Post by Null Abarada Fri Jul 16, 2010 10:16 pm

    Hmm, Dawn please try to explain more if you want to be a chuunin. Your personality is a decent amount of words, and all you need to do now is just add more about how you look. Such as what she wears, her eye color,hair color. But try too actually explain it more, it will give others a better visualization, and help your word count.

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    Post by Dawnpaw Fri Jul 16, 2010 10:23 pm

    you guys are no fun and she just turned chunin so theres not much too add
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    Post by Michishige Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:13 am

    please move your jutsu under the "jutsu" section
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    Post by Echo Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:18 am

    A chuunin would be B rank
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    Post by Dawnpaw Sun Jul 18, 2010 1:08 am

    woah really =o
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    Post by Kaito Jin Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:18 pm

    Ice spikes
    C-B Rank.

    Ice Release: Swallow Snow Storm
    Rank this please. Most likely B rank ofr the damage that you put.

    Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors
    Im pretty sure that this is an A ranked technique..

    Frosty wolf pack
    How many wolves? What is the range? Also Rank all of your techniques...

    Exploding ice clone
    B rank.

    Water Imprisonment of Doom
    B rank. How long does it last. How big is it. Please include these things... Also, you are allowed to take the regular jutsu Suiru no jutsu, and add onto it, that would be best...

    Chakra shield
    Define what rank it can block up to. And this is definately not D rank, if it is, then you can onbly block D rank attacks >.>

    Ice Blades
    I don't think that this is allowed, because your body is not made of ice... And to make ice out of nowhere is not B ranked, or chuunin.

    Happly Ever After
    No genjutsu can go for 5 weeks, and this is definatly not D rank if it goes for that long.....

    Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
    Definatly not D rank, please re judjge your jutsu...
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    Post by Dawnpaw Tue Jul 20, 2010 4:46 pm

    it doesnt go up to five weeks it makes them think 5 weeks have passed XD and ill fix the rest in a bit and can you tell me what to rank the wolf pack and i make the ice =from water from her body
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    Post by Dawnpaw Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:09 pm

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    Post by Kaito Jin Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:01 am

    Sorry about the hell viewing tech.

    rank B for the ice one. And again rank B for the ice hounds. Also please state how llong the ice pack can stay out for and how far away they can go


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    Post by Dawnpaw Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:19 pm

    ya thanks ^^
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    Post by Echo Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:43 am

    unusual amount if chakra

    Put more description into that

    Name:Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors

    B rank

    Name:Blizzard

    Give a radius of how big the blizzard is. And that would be B rank

    Chakra shield

    That would require incredible chakra control. Something your character doesn't have.

    Same with Chakra Disk

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