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    Post by Shikamatsu Fri Jun 25, 2010 3:53 pm

    ~General Information~

    Name: Shikamatsu
    Nickname/Alias: Shika
    Weight:165 lbs
    Height:6'0
    Age:23
    Gender: Male

    Appearance: Shikamatsu (done) Hidden_snow_akatsuki_fan_art_by_Bat

    Clothing: Shika stands about 6 feet in the air, he has white eyes due to his KKG and clan known as the Hyuuga. Unlike most Shinobi Shika has a faded color skin. Its almost like the color of snow, but a little darker which gives him the advantage when he fights in the snowy areas. Like his skin Shikas hair is the same color of his skin and is most of the time wrapped in a pony tail that barley touches his twin blades located on his back. The twin blades were passed down to Shika before he fled the village by his older brother. As for his forehead protector it is still wrapped around his forehead, but has a blue like rag that is behind it and stretches to the left side of his shoulder. The blue rag fly's forward as if its going to fly away, but it doesn't. The rag stays perfectly on his shoulder. Since Shika is in the organization known as the Akatsuki he is always seen with his Akatsuki cloak on which is always open never buttoned up. But with the help of his strap that holds his twin blades keeps his cloak adjusted just right.

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    Personality: Shika is dangerous person, and when around others if they seem scared of him
    he will acknowledge it with a smart remark that will most of the time make the other person mad. The other reason he is like this is because Shika is a fighter and he will be willing to fight anyone who thinks they are worthy opponent for him. Unlike most people when fighting Shika won't rush into an attack, instead he will read his opponent tell he has figured them out then will quickly end the fight in a cruel and evil way. Shika is a cold hearted person which is the reason he doesn't care for many people. If Shika was ever going to like someone it would be someone in the Akatsuki, but then its still possible that he will dislike the person.

    ~Clan Information~

    Clan Name: Hyuuga

    Kekei Genkai: Byakugan

    Clan Symbol: Shikamatsu (done) HyuugaClanSymbol

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    ~Rank/Village Information~

    Classification: Akatsuki member

    Letter Rank: A

    Village: Land of Fire

    ~Skill Information~

    Skill Specialty:

    • Main:Ninjutsu
    • Sub:Kenjutsu

    Elemental Affinity:

    • Main:Raiton
    • Main:Fuuton
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    Special Characteristics: Good chakra control

    Weapon

    Name: Hook swords

    Rank: B

    Owner: Shikamatsu

    Appearance:Shikamatsu (done) Swords_chinese_tiger_hook

    Length:33" overall

    Width: Blade Lengths: 21" , Handle Guard Blade 9"

    Material:Blade Material: Stainless Steel, Handle Material: Black Wrapped Cord

    Weight:1.6 Lbs (Each)

    Abilities: N/A

    Info: N/A

    ~History/RP Sample~

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    Post by Shikamatsu Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:21 am

    :Raiton Based Jutsu


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    Fuuton Based Jutsu

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    Hyuuga Based Jutsu

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    Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
    Bunshin Bakuha
    Rank: A
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack

    Bunshin Bakuha
    Bunshin Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.


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    Post by Echo Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:39 am

    Sorry but your KKG is way to similar to Sharingan, and is incredibly OP. I cant approve this.
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    Post by Michishige Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:40 am

    at a quick glance, you have to many S rank jutsu, you are only allowed two, start by taking out lightning armor, you're not allowed to have it, it is a kage/leader jutsu only. and as for your KKG, to powerful, so admin says cut it out, to much of a sharingan copy. work on that and i'll take a look at the rest of your app
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    Post by Shikamatsu Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:38 am

    Okay
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    Post by Michishige Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:41 pm

    sorry, no chidori, and edit your history to fit being a hyuuga. and this isn't a problem, just a question of mine, why have kenjutsu if you don't have a sword or sword techniques
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    Post by Shikamatsu Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:18 pm

    Okay, i will do that when i have the time two. As for the Kenjutsu part he had two twin blades there just wasn't a place to put the info about it...and the Jutsu i'm still working on
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    Post by Shikamatsu Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:54 pm

    Edited.
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    Post by Michishige Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:13 pm

    you cannot have a main element (fire, water, etc) as a sub element, sub elements are for combinations from a KKG, like steam or lave and such, so remove Doton and all according jutsu
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    Post by Shikamatsu Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:16 pm

    Edited again.
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    Post by Michishige Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:23 pm

    we are not accepting anymore S rank ninja, so please change it to A rank
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    Post by Shikamatsu Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:23 pm

    .....Done
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    Post by Michishige Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:37 pm

    Lightning Release: Strike! seems almost likse chidori, and we aren't allowing chidori like jutsu
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    Post by Shikamatsu Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:52 pm

    ..Edited..
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    Post by Michishige Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:01 am

    for Raikousochi No Jutsu(Lightning step), put a post count instead of seconds, and how long before you can use it again
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    Post by Shikamatsu Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:12 am

    Okay Done.
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    Post by Michishige Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:17 am

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