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    Post by Ohime Kagawa Enzeru Fri Oct 19, 2012 11:32 pm


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    Who... Am I?

      Name: Ohime Kagawa Enzeru

      Nickname/Alias: Thunder Princess

      Age: 29

      Gender: Female

      Is that really me?

      Appearance:Ohime Kagawa Enzeru Ke6ao1


      Facial Region: Enzeru has a heart shaped face, which is cupped by her yellow and orange bangs. She has reddish pink eyes that seem to hold all her emotions behind them, if someone knows her really well they would be able to read her from the emotion in her eyes. Her hair when down reaches down to her ass, however she prefers to keep it up in a pony tail so that it ends at about her mid back. Her hair color is a mixture of Pink, Red, Orange, and Yellow giving it a fire appearance.

      Extras: On her exposed cleavage there is a blood red tattoo, Upon using her Moetatsu no Jutsu (blazing technique) the tattoo beings to turn into fire allowing the rest of her body to do the same. Her tattoo goes from the top of her breasts down to her stomach and around her belly button, this tattoo will be black when shes asleep, blood red when shes alike and fire when activating her blazing technique. On the belt area of her pants she has a brown pack to the side normally hidden by the large jacket that contains a few kunai, burn medication, three shuriken and a few seals. The scarf around her neck is actually her old band, if she flips it over you can see the Kusa symbol with a line slashed through it, though its very unlikely to be seen.


      Clothing: Enzeru wears a simple outfit that is good for any weather (since she can turn into fire). Her outfit consist of a bikini top that be ranged from colors to black, pink, white,blue, yellow etc. She has numerous colors for different visits. Around her shoulders or normally being warn is a males jacket, she will either roll up the sleeves and tie up the back or leave it ale one and wear it unbuttoned. She`ll sometimes wear a scarf around her neck depending on the weather. Her bottoms consist of a pair of pants that have been cut to be used at short shorts, the colors consist of Black or Blue. When you reach to her knees you`ll see either a pair of long black boots or colored knee length fish net stocking along with a pair of boots that being a few inches down from the sock. Her boots may be used to color code with her tops..

      Weight: 150 pounds Slim and Fit

      Height: 5'5

      Ethnicity: Light skin tone.

      Voice: Cool, Collected and doesn't rush in choices.

        Likes:
      • Water
      • Alcohol
      • War
      • Effortless things
      • Sweets

        Dislikes:
      • Slutty women
      • Idiots
      • Homosexual men
      • Effort
      • Happiness


      Personality:
      Positive;
      Intelligent: Enzeru is a very intelligent ninja. She has spent most of her life training and Learning. Enzeru learned how to read peoples emotions from a young age, along with how to study peoples fighting styles.(Note:She can NOT copy them) While in a fight Enzeru plans out numerous ways to carry out different endings. This process takes about forty to sixty seconds.
      Leadership: Enzeru likes to take leadership. When it comes to controlling other people she prefers to be in charge. She doesn`t expect to be liked she just wants to be in control. She believes that a leader is made to be feared not loved.
      Confident: Enzeru is a very confident ninja. When it comes to presenting herself in front of other people Enzeru makes sure that she shows off her strengths. She speaks with a confident tone to her voice and never shows fear to others.
      Flirty: Enzeru is very flirty with both genders, she doesn`t mind if shes messing with a female or male. Both genders tickle her fancy, although she prefers the male gender out of both choices. As flirtatious as Enzeru is she prefers to avoid real relationships this allows her to keep herself from becoming emotionally attached and allows her to use her "lovers" as pawns.
      Charming: Enzeru is a charmer and a bit of a player. She has been known to mess with peoples hearts and minds to get her way. She can be well mannered to others making herself seem less intimidating than she really is. When Enzeru becomes charming she is known to play and hide any feelings of hatred or untrust towards them.

      Negative;
      Conniving: When Enzeru wants something she`ll use everyone and anyone to get her way. People use to tell Enzeru that she had a way with words and they were correct. She can tell a female everything they want to hear and she can be very persuasive with males. She has been known to black mail and even turn people against one another.
      Sarcastic: When it comes to being sarcastic Enzeru is the queen of it. She doesn`t take the time to play nice with others and if something stupid is said she is more than likely going to comment on it so that they can hate her. She never holds back whats on her mind so she tends to say things sarcastically to get peoples attention or to mock them till they want to kill her.
      Bi-polar: Bi-polar is a understatement though it fits her well enough. Enzeru has alot of mood swings and although its hard to make her upset she will switch back from angry to happy quickly and suddenly. When speaking to her, alot of the Kusa people would stand back incase she got upset. Her moods reflect her in the fallowing ways;
      Upset/Sad: This normally leads to a tantrum or a fight depending on the person and if she has them wrapped around her finger or not.
      Anger/Pissed: This will either be a fight or some rough and tumble adult like stuff depending on the person.
      Happy/Excited: A straight up fight or black mailing scene is sure to fallow this mood.
      Tired/Cranky: You`ll be likely to get ignored or into a fight with a very upset and mean Enzeru.
      Sadistic: Enzeru enjoys peoples pain, if she can cause someone to suffer she will without any hesitation. She feels that pain is weakness. If she kidnaps someone enzeru will torture them in many ways, she likes to hear peoples pain filled screams and loves to start wars. If no one is getting hurt then you can come to the conclusion that Enzeru was not behind it..

      My...Family?

      Clan: Ohimi CLan

      Unique Clan Features: KKG Storm Release

      It's all coming back to me now..

      Classification: Legendary Swordsmen Of The Mist

      Letter Rank: A

      Village: Kirigakure

      My skills were unmatched..

      -Skill Specialties-

      Available Starting Points: 10


      • 1. Ninjutsu- Master
      • 2. Weaponary-Kenjutsu- Artisan
      • 3. Genjutsu- Novice


      -Elements-


      • 1. Lightning
      • 2. Water
      • 3.
      • Comb. Storm


      -Jutsu-

      E:1
      D:4
      C:12
      B:8
      A:7
      S:3
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      This is my Story

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    Post by Ohime Kagawa Enzeru Sat Oct 20, 2012 10:52 pm

    done i think
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    Post by Echo Sun Oct 21, 2012 12:39 am


    • Expand more on your appearance and personality.

    • You'd be A ranked just starting off.

    • To use Storm Release you need a Kekkei Genkai
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    Post by Ohime Kagawa Enzeru Mon Oct 22, 2012 9:12 pm

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    Post by Echo Mon Oct 22, 2012 9:42 pm

    Kishin no Jutsu [Fierce God Technique]

    You don't have the lion contract.

    Kurogane no Oui: Tekkoujo [Iron Throne: Ironworks]

    That requires you to be able to summon the Iron Throne, something you wouldn't be able to do.

    Kurogane no Oui: Naeru Oukan [Iron Throne: Withering Crown]

    Same with this.

    Kamigan no Jutsu [God's Eye Technique]

    The way it is described makes it seem like it can knock an S ranked technique down to A rank before it comes into impact.

    An S ranked technique, with enough destructive force, would simply blow the thing away. The jutsu itself, if focused on pure destruction, that is.

    Raiton: Iaido [Lightning Release: Quick Draw]

    Explain the lightning bolts a little more. The range, all that stuff. How powerful each bolt is, etc.

    Ranton no Yoroi [Storm Release Armor]

    Currently the Lightning Release technique is banned, thus a mimicking technique of it isn't allowed.

    Dangan bāningu - Burning Bullet

    To heat it up you would need fire as an element.

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    Post by Ohime Kagawa Enzeru Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:34 pm

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    Post by Eki Gisou Fri Oct 26, 2012 3:39 am

    Should be your last couple of fixes Ohime... I like to do things all at once and get it wrapped up.

    Name:Ranton: Reizā Sākasu (Storm Release: Laser Circus)
    Rank:A
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 4
    Element: Storm
    Description: This technique creates several beams and shoots them at the enemy. First, a halo of bright energy spreads around the user's hands as this technique is activated, then the technique encircles the user's hand and from that the beams are shot out towards the enemy. The user is able to alter the beams direction after being shot, making it possible to strike multiple enemies with pinpoint accuracy, even bypassing hostages held in close proximity. The user can increase the number of beams to a great amount to pin down an enemy.

    While I know you wouldn't abuse it, it needs a max number. Even something as high as 25 is fine for me, but it needs to be there.

    Name: Gekidou no Jutsu [Upheaval Technique]
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 2
    Element: Storm
    Description: A simple technique where the user sends a beam of ranton energy into the ground and has it comes up from underneath his target, increasing the flow of his chakra upon the moment of its emergence. This causes the beam to further energize and create a pillar of destructive ranton energy that has a radius of ten feet and height of thirty.


    How does this effect an opponent. What kind of damage? Utter obliteration? Or a bodily shock? Secondly, a ten foot radius is twenty feet across, at thirty feet high, that's huge for an attack you wouldn't see coming. Either up the rank, or lower the size.

    [qoute]Name: Shingami Ittoryu: Oketsu [Death God One-Sword Style: Impure Blood]
    Rank: C
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Hand Seals: 0
    Element: Lightning
    Description: The user charges raiton element chakra along their blade, causing it to crackle with violet lightning. This lightning then begins to swirl around the length of the blade, making a loud, distorted noise akin to a power drill while at the same time forming a sort of a drill head around the blade as the lightning spins. Then the user simply makes a mad dash for their target, aiming to impale their target with the lightning drill they have formed as it specializes in drilling through defenses.][/quote]

    B rank.

    Name: Suiton: Mizuame Yagura [Water Release: Syrup Turret]
    Rank: B
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 3
    Element: Water
    Description: The user will generate Suiton chakra into the back of their throat, spatially recomposing it as a liquid. This liquid will then be spewed out of the user's maw, aiming to deflect mid-air projectiles and repel even heavy opponents several yards away. The liquid being projected, however, contains a surprisingly high viscosity, its texture almost like that of molasses. When drenched in the substance, victims will find any movement made to be strictly resisted, making it almost impossible for those without great strength to move properly

    SOOOOO much more potential, make the fluid flammable for your syrup techniques, then ignite with the Raiton. Us mods don't just criticize you know.

    Name: Taiyou Furea no Jutsu [Solar Flare Technique]
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 1
    Element: Storm
    Description:With a single handseal, the user can release a pulse of concussive ranton energy capable of pushing back individuals or small objects several yards. This jutsu does call for the user to stand still in order to use this jutsu, making it a jutsu that one must use in a tactical manner.

    Needs a range of effect. I.E. Not how far it can push something, but how far you can push something from.

    Name: Shinigami Ittoryu: Tenshi no Shoushi Ikazuchi [Death God One-Sword Style: Angel of Midnight Thunder]
    Rank: S
    Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
    Hand Seals: 0
    Element: Storm
    Description: The user of this technique, first sends out a large shockwave of violet colored raiton chakra outward within a thirty foot radius at a high rate of speed. This chakra carries with it a special charge, though harmless. This raiton chakra then condenses itself around the user in as it prepares to be molded. The level of physical speed required for this technique is key. Moving at a high rate of speed, attacks from various directions are performed. Using the prepared raiton chakra, the user of the technique is then capable of creating afterimages of themselves in the form of blinding lightning. At the same time, the user is still attempting to slash at the target, though avoiding any oncoming attacks to themselves. These dozens upon dozens of lightning afterimages then condense into the form of swords, raining down as projectiles directly at the target. Using any previous contact with the shock wave of chakra from the beginning of the technique as homing signal due to the residual electrical charge. These swords made of pure raiton chakra carry with them the ability to pierce like lightning and cut into flesh with ease, attempting embed themselves into the target at a high rate of speed while still delivering a powerful shock. The idea is to confuse the enemy in a form similar to the Dance of the Crescent Moon, but by adding a lightning styled twist to it.

    That type of control, needs some hand seals, if anything, just to make it fair for an opponent to get out of the way. This could be a practical auto-hit if they were right in front of you otherwise.

    Name: Kubire (Constriction)
    Rank: C
    Type: Genjutsu
    Hand Seals: 2
    Element: None
    Description: After two handseals, the user will cast a genjutsu and make the enemy believe their clothes are constricting. It doesn't cause any permanent damage and simply restricts their movements for a key number of moments until the opponent releases the genjutsu.

    Needs a medium. All genjutsu uses one of the five sense to take effect. Do they hear you whistle a short tune, look at your eyes or fingers. Do you make them smell a certain fragrance. Otherwise this would auto-hit.

    Name: Asshuku taihō - Compression Cannon
    Rank: S
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 5
    Element: Water
    Description: After a series of five hand seals, the user will inhale then unleash a powerful jet of compressed water. While this is not overly complicated, the chakra control needed to compress the water is extremely difficult and thus it's high rank, and the damage it can cause is catastrophic. Compressed at this level, the water could easily cut through diamond and is capable of damaging even a Bijuu if used by someone with high enough skill in Ninjutsu.

    I remember having a jutsu similar to this as a Hoshigaki character I played. I got away with A rank, though mine could only cut through stone. Either way, this seems between A-S rather than a full out S. If you want, you can nerf it a bit and save your last S rank slot. Just let me know, otherwise, it's good.

    Name: Ranton - Bunshin [Storm Clone]
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Hand Seals: 1
    Element: Storm
    Description: A simple jutsu where the user creates a clone out of pure Ranton energy. The clones can only use Ranton jutsu and are weaker than most clones, due to them being pure energy. The trump card however, is that when disrupted. The energy can either cause a large, concussive blast.

    Regular Bunshins are B rank, elemental ones are instantly A rank if they have dispersal effects. Not C.

    Name: Magen: Kurobara [Demonic Illusion: Black Roses]
    Rank: D
    Type: Genjutsu
    Hand Seals: 1
    Element: None
    Description: A low class illusion that when used the caster will burst into a large number of black rose petals when they are struck. The petals will spiral around the area.

    Name: Enmaku (Smoke Screen)
    Rank: D
    Type: Genjutsu
    Hand Seals: 1
    Element: None
    Description: The user for this illusion breaths in and seems to breath out a large thick smoke. The smoke illusion is used to consume him and the area to hide him and allow him to attack his enemies from inside the illusion of smoke.

    Name: Gen Bunshin no Jutsu [Illusionary Clone Technique]
    Rank: C
    Type: Genjutsu
    Hand Seals: 2
    Element: None
    Description: When casted this illusion will create multiple 'clones' of the caster in the form of an illusion. Everything these illusions do is at the exact same time. They will talk together and move together. When they are attacked the attacks will go right through them yet the illusion will stay unharmed,. Similar to the clone technique just more advanced. But once discovered as a genjutsu they can easily be broken by the simple release command.

    Mediums. just rephrase it so they need to be looking at you when you use the jutsu, that'll do.

    History is sufficient, RP sample exceptional, fix these up, and you'll be approved.
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    Post by Ohime Kagawa Enzeru Fri Oct 26, 2012 3:53 pm

    Edited I was fine with that S rank so just added it A-S for damage wise.
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    Post by Eki Gisou Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:07 pm

    Approved and Moved.

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